Monday, 8 October 2012

Stuck And Need Ideas How to Move Ahead

Hi folks! I guess you must have guessed by now that Adheer and Vidya are my protagonists who are destined to meet and fall in love. The problem is that now I've created these characters and characterisations (hopefully you are getting an idea of who and what they are as people), I don't know how they should meet!

Should they meet in a work related environment?

Should they meet in a non work related environment - like you know, at a public place etc.

The thing with the former is that I'm not sure that their relationship should be defined by their work - although it is the reason that brings them to Barmer in the first place.

I'm kind of leaning towards a non work related environment. But would strictly try to stay away from the 'under the waterfall' type scenes.

Or is there are third option that I've not thought of at all?

Please suggest! I'm open to ideas. 

Monday, 1 October 2012

Chapter 3


As Vidya watched the bus trundle away, she felt a tinge of sadness. It would be months before she saw her family again. She loved her life and her work here in Rajasthan. The last two years had simply flown past, so engrossed had she become in her work. But there were times, when she felt lonely and longed for family,  some companionship. She had been lucky that she found a place to live with the Agarwal family.

Mr. Parmeshwar Agarwal was a retired bureaucrat. After 35 years of living all over the country, he had returned to his home town of Barmer to enjoy his retirement years. He and his wife Chitra lived a quiet life in their renovated and modernised haveli.

Located a little outside the town, it was a huge mansion set in the midst of an entire acre of land. The Agarwals took a keen interest in gardening and it showed. Under their loving care, and as much as the arid land would allow, the garden flourished and was one of the few green spots in that area. It was the garden that had first attracted Vidya to the haveli. It could not of course, compete with the lavish garden that housed the bungalow of the District Collector, just a few metres down the road. But that garden had the full support of the district administration backing it!

Vidya smoothly manoeuvred her Scooty in through the haveli gate, then parked at the side to shut it behind her. As she drove up the driveway, the haveli appeared in the distance. It was a stately, double storied structure in white with lovely arched doorways and jharoka windows so typical of Rajasthani architecture. Against the evening sunlight, it looked graceful and welcoming.

Outside, on the lawn, sat Mr. Agarwal sipping his evening tea and engrossed in reading. As the sound of the Scooty broke through the quiet of the dusk, he looked up and broke into a smile.

“Aha! There comes my favourite social worker. Come and have a cup of tea with me and tell me about your day.” The Agarwals were very fond of Vidya. Their only son lived overseas and they had no daughters.

Vidya lived with them as a tenant / paying guest. Initially she had been hesitant to move in, wondering if it was appropriate that she, as a development worker, should live in such luxurious quarters. But after seeing at least half a dozen other houses, she changed her mind. The comfort factor aside, from a safety point of view, living with the Agarwals was the sensible thing to do. They on the other hand, were delighted to have Vidya live with them. At first they refused to accept rent. But when Vidya put her foot down, they agreed reluctantly. Vidya knew that the amount they charged her was ridiculously low. The Agarwals however would not hear of charging more rent. As far as they were concerned, Vidya was doing them a favour.

Vidya took the seat opposite Mr. Agarwal and propped her feet up on the third chair. She heaved a sigh and looked up at him.

“Just returning from seeing off my brother, Uncle. Feeling a little low. I won’t be seeing them for a while.”

“Come, come! Cheer up. They’ll be back before you know it. And anyway, you are planning to go home for Diwali this year. And that’s just 4 months away. Time will just fly….don’t you worry. Now have your tea and try those biscuits. Your Chitra aunty has outdone herself with them.” 

Sunday, 23 September 2012

Chapter 2


“Is it really necessary to bury yourself in the boondocks to prove your dedication to society?” asked Arun irritably.

Vidya looked at her brother and smiled. She knew there was a genuine concern for her well being behind his irritation. She also knew that he would be grilled by their parents for news about her life and lifestyle when he returned home to Chennai. It was usually her parents who made this trip to Barmer every few months – so they could get first hand reassurance that she was alright. This time they had sent Arun, her older brother, as their mother was recuperating from a bout of jaundice.

Anna, you know the answer to that question,” she replied. “You’ve known it ever since I decided to do a masters degree in social work.”

“Yes, but why do you have to live so far away from us? Here, in Barmer, Rajasthan? Connectivity is so poor, facilities are bad and to top it all, it is so hot!” said Arun. He was used to the hustle bustle of city life. Being the IT geek that he was, he took amenities like electricity, plumbing and running water for granted.

“But  Anna, that is precisely what recommends this place to me! It is the reason why I should be here, putting my learning and skills to good use. Besides, do you know that land prices here are skyrocketing because they struck oil here? It won’t remain the ‘boondocks’ for much longer!” said Vidya, gently mocking her brother.

Arun looked at his sister intently. Her face lit up when she talked about her work. He had observed her over the past week, even accompanied her to the villages where she worked. He grimaced as he recalled the dusty journeys when he rode pillion on her bike, yelping every time it hit a pothole.

But Vidya seemed to enjoy it – indeed thrive on it. She worked hard throughout the day, sometimes even in the night. He knew she empathised with the daily trials and tribulations of the women and children in the villages where she worked.

Even as a child, she had tried to do social work! He remembered how she would readily share her toys with the daughter of their domestic help. Their home had sheltered many stray cats and dogs. A complete sucker for a sob story, his little sister was all heart and feeling. His heart swelled with love and pride….and yes, even a little envy.

“….so please tell Appa and Amma not to worry about me. I love this place and I love my work. And Anna, please for heaven’s sake tell them to stop sending me bio datas of eligible bachelors. I’m not ready to get married anytime soon. When I am, I’ll let them know. Now hurry up, or you will miss your bus.”

Wednesday, 19 September 2012

Chapter 1


Adheer watched as the truck pulled out of the drive way. That was the last of his belongings, all packed and set. Another move, another destination, another chapter in his life. He turned and walked back into the empty house, taking a last look at the bungalow that had been his home for two years. He paused at the window in his erstwhile study and looked out, his thoughts taking him back to the last ten years.

He had been on top of the world when he had qualified for the Indian Administrative Service. His grandfather, a doctor by qualification, had been a freedom fighter. His father, also a doctor, had been disappointed when Adheer had not chosen to follow in his footsteps. But he had been proud that his son was entering the civil services after securing the fifth rank at an all India level. Adheer remembered the day he left home to take charge of his first posting in Rajasthan. He had been raring to go and impatient when his father had wanted a word with him.

“Son, it is not an easy path you have chosen for yourself. Everyday will be a test – of your intelligence, tenacity and ethics. There maybe times when you will be overcome with self doubt. When your trust is shaken. Consider your choices carefully. And whatever decision you take, be sure that you can look yourself in the eye after that”. Those were the last words his father had said to him. Less than a month later, the good doctor had died of a massive cardiac arrest.

As it turned out, his father’s words had been prophetic. The last ten years were proof enough. Right from his first posting, Adheer had courted controversy.

Banswara, a district in southern Rajasthan, had been picturesque, with its jungles and hilly terrain. He took charge as the Assistant District Magistrate there, under the supervision of P.C. Rathod, the District Collector. For all his lofty sounding Rajput name, Rathod was a boulder. Nothing moved on his watch. Which meant that files did not move. Decisions on development works were kept pending, although funds got mysteriously spent. He tied Adheer’s hands with rules and procedures. Adheer however, was the irresistible force that toppled the immovable object.

When Rathod was sent for a two month training programme to the Lal Bahadur Shastri National Academy of Administration in Mussoorie, Adheer was left in charge as the acting district collector.  Not one to let a golden chance go by, Adheer put the power vested so temporarily in him to good use. Cracking the whip, he opened closed files, initiated enquiries and slapped vigilance cases left right and centre. Clerks, officers, executives, MLAs, MPs, he did not spare anyone. When Rathod returned, he was confronted with a battlefield. People he usually shielded and protected were up in arms. But the damage had been done. Adheer had to be taught a lesson.

The MP from that constituency was a master strategist. It was mostly his party workers that Adheer had thrown behind bars on different cases. He knew that harming Adheer in anyway would create a furore. An aspirant to Prime Ministership, he had to tread carefully in order to protect his image. Apart from the fact that Adheer had won the hearts of the local population, he was also the scion of a freedom fighter. So the MP did the only other thing he could. He rewarded Adheer for his exemplary work in bringing the corrupt to justice and recommended him for a promotion. At a public ceremony organised to honour Adheer, he praised him for his honesty and sincerity, thereby showing himself to be a man who defended and supported the upright. He then went on to ensure that Adheer was transferred out of Banswara, never to return.

The next ten years saw Adheer gaining the  reputation of being a ‘tough nut to crack’. An honest and upright civil servant, transfers became a way of life. Every now and again Adheer packed his bags and moved mostly because he had stepped on some important toes. Six transfers in a tenure of only ten years was a record of some sort.

Adheer guessed he should be happy that he was being true to himself and his conscience. He understood now what his father had tried to explain to him all those  years ago. And yet, he was beset with a strange feeling of disquiet. A feeling of restlessness that did not go away no matter how many transfers or new places he went to. Was that why his parents had named him Adheer? Or had he taken on the qualities of his name? Adheer, the restless one.

(to be continued....)

Tuesday, 18 September 2012

Introducing The Storyteller

“After nourishment, shelter and companionship, stories are the thing we need most in the world.” ― Philip Pullman

For as far back as I can remember, I have loved stories. I love reading, writing and telling stories. I remember watching movies, then keeping my friends enthralled with a retelling of the stories I liked, adding my own mirch masala and interpretation to what I saw.

My favourite kind of stories are those that centre around relationships. I love stories that explore human relationships, highlight emotions and let you get into the head of the character you're reading about. At the same time, I attribute the characters with my own sensibility. Which is why I tend to have extreme and emotional reactions to the characters I read about. I've fallen in love with Mr. Darcy. I've hated Scarlett O'Hara. I feel I am Elizabeth Bennett. I love that my stories let me BE the characters that I imagine. To be so many different people, to experience myriad lives....all of it in one lifetime.

My very first story on this blog is a first for me in this genre - A love story. I'm not quite sure how it will shape up. I hope to make it a story that you could relate to and fall in love with.

So if I've piqued your interest in me and this blog, come back here in two days time and you will be able to read the first chapter of the story.